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I placed my hands on, the keys
And you placed your hands on mine.
I looked into your, eyes
I think we both just stopped time.

So hold on just one more minute
and I think I might die
Cause you make my heart, beat insanely

and I don't know why.
I just don't know why. I cry

I hear a song in your words
but you see fiction in my mind
I see a tear in your eye
What made us unwind?

So please hold on just one more minute
and I think I might die
Cause i feel a sadness growing

And I don't know why.
I never knew why. I cry

I placed my hands on, the keys
And you placed your hands, on your side
©2009 ~Senshomaru
:iconsenshomaru:

Author's Comments

This Is my first song. If I can get the chords right i'll find a way to record it and put that up

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:iconcrystal-kyogre:
<3

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:iconsenshomaru:
Thank you !!!

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:iconmidnight-fairy-tale:
Awww its so cute!

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"Until you know that life is interesting
--and find it so--
you haven't found your soul."
-Geoffrey Fisher
:iconsenshomaru:
Thank you very much

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:iconblue-sundays:
It's pretty good. I think the fourth line would sound better like this, "I think we just stopped time."

Without the "both".

Anyway, keep it up. :)


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OBEY!
:iconsenshomaru:
yeah i realized that after i submitted it

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